Tuesday, February 06, 2007

Twilight Time


Seaside, OR 2005




Sun sets west, wakes east

Waves sing rhythmic lullabies

Twilight dreams appear



Prompt: This week's focus is on the time of day when the sun is beginning to set and when much of the world begins to settle in for a rest. What a beautiful prompt. For more, visit One Deep Breath.


9 comments:

AnnieElf said...

Beautiful haiku of rhythms and cycles.

paris parfait said...

This is a beautiful haiku! Unfortunately, the picture isn't loading.

getzapped said...

Very nice! I can hear the waves singing me to sleep - nearing dreamland. Btw, I said on my blog that the my dusk picture is of the Cascade Mnts. Peace.

Mikim said...

I love the sun waking the east and the rythmic waves creating the sense of a back and forth motion like that of a cradle, and then "dreams appear" ~beautiful.

Novel Nymph said...

I wish I was brilliant enough to form seven syllables like the ones you just did in the middle of that lovely haiku...

Tammy said...

Twilight dreams is a wonderful phrase and I loved that picture!

G said...

This is very rhythmical and lovely.

rhino said...

ahh...the oregon coast at twilight...

such a wonderous place...

and a wonderful haiku

Kelly said...

You are so lucky to be able to see such beautiful sunsets...Living on the eastern seaboard, I get the sun rises...but I'm never up that early, so I don't think I've seen one in a looong time. :D
Can't wait to read your poetry.