Seaside, OR 2005
Sun sets west, wakes east
Waves sing rhythmic lullabies
Twilight dreams appear
Prompt: This week's focus is on the time of day when the sun is beginning to set and when much of the world begins to settle in for a rest. What a beautiful prompt. For more, visit One Deep Breath.
9 comments:
Beautiful haiku of rhythms and cycles.
This is a beautiful haiku! Unfortunately, the picture isn't loading.
Very nice! I can hear the waves singing me to sleep - nearing dreamland. Btw, I said on my blog that the my dusk picture is of the Cascade Mnts. Peace.
I love the sun waking the east and the rythmic waves creating the sense of a back and forth motion like that of a cradle, and then "dreams appear" ~beautiful.
I wish I was brilliant enough to form seven syllables like the ones you just did in the middle of that lovely haiku...
Twilight dreams is a wonderful phrase and I loved that picture!
This is very rhythmical and lovely.
ahh...the oregon coast at twilight...
such a wonderous place...
and a wonderful haiku
You are so lucky to be able to see such beautiful sunsets...Living on the eastern seaboard, I get the sun rises...but I'm never up that early, so I don't think I've seen one in a looong time. :D
Can't wait to read your poetry.
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