Monday, December 18, 2006

Storm

Autumn's final dance
Yellow leaves twirl, spin downward
Winter approaching

Wind choir singing
Fir tree ballet in progress
Dancer loses limb

More storm haiku here

9 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the idea of the trees dancing.

Anonymous said...

A dancer losing a limb, something to think about, well done.

michelle said...

I also love that line...

"Dancer loses limb"

It throws me.

Tammy Brierly said...

I love the wind making your haiku dance ;)

Tiffany said...

The "dancer loses limb" line makes us take real notice of the whole poem. Lovely!

Becca said...

I like the "wind choir"!

Great job :)

Anonymous said...

I like the images you have created. Nice poems!

megan said...

fir tree ballet...really nice imagery

JP (mom) said...

Great poem - the dancing & singing, brilliant - wonderful poem with a very strong second stanza! Much peace, JP