Monday, December 18, 2006

Storm

Autumn's final dance
Yellow leaves twirl, spin downward
Winter approaching

Wind choir singing
Fir tree ballet in progress
Dancer loses limb

More storm haiku here

10 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

I like the idea of the trees dancing.

Mike Mc said...

A dancer losing a limb, something to think about, well done.

michelle said...

I also love that line...

"Dancer loses limb"

It throws me.

Tammy said...

I love the wind making your haiku dance ;)

paris parfait said...

Lovely haiku, although the "dancer loses limb" is a little disturbing.

Tiffany said...

The "dancer loses limb" line makes us take real notice of the whole poem. Lovely!

Becca said...

I like the "wind choir"!

Great job :)

Sandy said...

I like the images you have created. Nice poems!

megan said...

fir tree ballet...really nice imagery

Jane Poe (aka Deborah) said...

Great poem - the dancing & singing, brilliant - wonderful poem with a very strong second stanza! Much peace, JP