Finding solace in photography
I like the idea of the trees dancing.
A dancer losing a limb, something to think about, well done.
I also love that line..."Dancer loses limb"It throws me.
I love the wind making your haiku dance ;)
Lovely haiku, although the "dancer loses limb" is a little disturbing.
The "dancer loses limb" line makes us take real notice of the whole poem. Lovely!
I like the "wind choir"! Great job :)
I like the images you have created. Nice poems!
fir tree ballet...really nice imagery
Great poem - the dancing & singing, brilliant - wonderful poem with a very strong second stanza! Much peace, JP
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I like the idea of the trees dancing.
A dancer losing a limb, something to think about, well done.
I also love that line...
"Dancer loses limb"
It throws me.
I love the wind making your haiku dance ;)
Lovely haiku, although the "dancer loses limb" is a little disturbing.
The "dancer loses limb" line makes us take real notice of the whole poem. Lovely!
I like the "wind choir"!
Great job :)
I like the images you have created. Nice poems!
fir tree ballet...really nice imagery
Great poem - the dancing & singing, brilliant - wonderful poem with a very strong second stanza! Much peace, JP
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