tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post4153389379274949627..comments2016-11-23T12:14:49.806-08:00Comments on Solace in Nature: StormJonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04299647754479967070noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-57356920460164110792006-12-20T08:27:00.000-08:002006-12-20T08:27:00.000-08:00Great poem - the dancing & singing, brilliant - wo...Great poem - the dancing & singing, brilliant - wonderful poem with a very strong second stanza! <i>Much peace, JP</i>JP (mom)https://www.blogger.com/profile/03120439923927414464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-23017341520593742592006-12-19T19:59:00.000-08:002006-12-19T19:59:00.000-08:00fir tree ballet...really nice imageryfir tree ballet...really nice imagerymeganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00752325087812245351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-43645939380573045642006-12-19T14:22:00.000-08:002006-12-19T14:22:00.000-08:00I like the images you have created. Nice poems!I like the images you have created. Nice poems!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-54808450001971193412006-12-18T16:11:00.000-08:002006-12-18T16:11:00.000-08:00I like the "wind choir"!
Great job :)I like the "wind choir"! <br /><br />Great job :)Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-2108591784265777372006-12-18T14:21:00.000-08:002006-12-18T14:21:00.000-08:00The "dancer loses limb" line makes us take real no...The "dancer loses limb" line makes us take real notice of the whole poem. Lovely!Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07191011478662020856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-62770353721807411472006-12-18T13:29:00.000-08:002006-12-18T13:29:00.000-08:00Lovely haiku, although the "dancer loses limb" is ...Lovely haiku, although the "dancer loses limb" is a little disturbing.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-67075814160554313052006-12-18T13:10:00.000-08:002006-12-18T13:10:00.000-08:00I love the wind making your haiku dance ;)I love the wind making your haiku dance ;)Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-32191781786139029382006-12-18T12:47:00.000-08:002006-12-18T12:47:00.000-08:00I also love that line...
"Dancer loses limb"
It ...I also love that line...<br /><br />"Dancer loses limb"<br /><br />It throws me.michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15684528126514742135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-33307767883866947222006-12-18T12:38:00.000-08:002006-12-18T12:38:00.000-08:00A dancer losing a limb, something to think about, ...A dancer losing a limb, something to think about, well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36620581.post-81219557754303057762006-12-18T11:51:00.000-08:002006-12-18T11:51:00.000-08:00I like the idea of the trees dancing.I like the idea of the trees dancing.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.com