Thursday, January 03, 2008

One Deep Breath: Frost



sparkle fringe outline
seize the diamonds-quick
vanish before us

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frost dancers line edge
quickstep into the new year
pirouette and poof!

For more thoughts on frost, visit One Deep Breath.

11 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

Lovely frosty photo! I love your line 'sparkle fringe outline' too! Hope you've got over your cold and best wishes for 2008!

qualcosa di bello said...

a perfect match of verse & photo! a lovely shot...

happy new year!!

spacedlaw said...

I liove the nonchalance in the second one!

tumblewords said...

ah, dancing on the edge! a fine visual!

Roswila said...

Ah, seize the diamonds, yes, we need to always do that ... the moment is always melting even as we become aware of it ... sorry, it's my birthday tomorrow and I'm more than usually aware of the passing of all things (I'm turning 64) ...

Inland Empire Girl said...

I love the line " sparkle fringe outline".It goes with the picture so well. I hope you are feeling better.

Kelly Fineman said...

Phenomenal photo. Great haiku, but I especially love the "sparkle fringe outline" line.

Cloudscome said...

Beautiful! I wanted to get out and photograph the frost this morning but the library was jumping to fast. Thanks for posting this.

Sandy Carlson said...

Poof is right! Beautiful poem. God bless.
Writing in Faith

Jane Poe (aka Deborah) said...

A lively, lovely take on frost! JP/deb

Tammy said...

Another great picture with terrific haiku!