Friday, November 09, 2007

One Deep Breath: Loneliness

It is Friday. I have haiku to contribute. It has been a good week. "Loneliness" is the prompt for the week thanks to Patois.

misty fog threads city
a leaf tumbles, floats from branch
I peer from window

nose pressed on window
rain drop drips against cold pane
waits, anticipates

packages unwrapped
tree lights blink, cast shadows
unseen emotions

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3 comments:

Crafty Green Poet said...

very atmospheric, there's a lot of emotion here too

Inland Empire Girl said...

I really like the last verse here. Nice!

AnnieElf said...

Hello Jone. Sorry I got here so late. All three are poignant but the first and "I peer from window" is most moving.