Sunday, November 04, 2007

One Deep Breath: Change

I see a small group of students for lunch on Thursdays. We write poetry. I often use the prompts by One Deep Breath for the group as appropriate. Lots of times I write as well. Wrote this but missed the posting deadline.

scrunch, crunch, scuffle, kick
burnt sienna leaf carpet
spring recycled here

For more, visit One Deep Breath. My goal is to get posted before the comments close this week.

3 comments:

Inland Empire Girl said...

Nice poem... what a good idea. I wonder if I could get students to write with me at lunch?

AnnieElf said...

Oh, Jone. I so like this. I want to run through a pile of crunchy leaves.

Crafty Green Poet said...

How nice to have poetry writing lunches with your students! I like your haiku a lot, especailly the second line and the recycling concept.